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There was a man

Playing in the world of illusion
Laughing loud like a psycho
Forgetting his responsibility

He didn't know
He didn't realize
He didn't care

He has entered the crooked path
which there was a dead end

Hatred
Insanity
Madness
They became the part of him

Family
Religion
Society
They were faded from him

Now
He lives in the asylum
I hope he's okay.
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Shining-Scribe Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Wow. Thought-provoking to say the least. I wish I could say what his fate will be, but alas I find the answer too unclear. 
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amirunthenoob1 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2016  Student Writer
Thanks for the critic.
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Shining-Scribe Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Not a problem at all. :3
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nuaiemnajmi Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2016  Student Photographer
He'll be alright
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amirunthenoob1 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2016  Student Writer
Are you sure?
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Acornella Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2016  Student Writer
Wow. Really powerful..
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amirunthenoob1 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2016  Student Writer
Maybe
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Acornella Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2016  Student Writer
It is good!!!
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